ext_28816 ([identity profile] hanarobi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lories_friends2008-02-02 09:42 pm

My story

I have posted my story in my LJ. Here's the link to A Loaf of Bread and Thou.

And a final, huge thanks to [livejournal.com profile] baranduin, [livejournal.com profile] trianne, and [livejournal.com profile] claudia603 for doing all this.


And to [livejournal.com profile] lorie945 with love.

http://hanarobi.livejournal.com/130101.html#cutid1

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not familiar with the original, nor any fanfic, for this story, but I found it easy to follow, for the most part. I enjoyed the loving relationship between these two, and the hint of their past story makes me eager to read more.

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I have it saved.

[identity profile] elanorgardner.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*hangs head* I have The Charioteer sitting in my stack of "to reads" beside my bed. Stack is pretty darn high. I noodled out enough to realize that this is a lovely snippet of their world and homage to Lorie's story as well.

So sad to see their relationship tainted by the fear of discovery. Perhaps in our lifetime we will see legislation in most of the civilized world that allows all of us to love who we love and marry who we wish, period. At that point, I think we will have passed another stage of evolution.

Thanks for this!